“They get more attention with negativity.”
In an open field there sits an old farmer.
He lives in one of the best spots the world has to offer.
That spot is ancient Babylon.
At this time Babylon is the most advanced civilization in the world.
He goes out in the early mornings to admire his crops.
He doesn’t own much just enough to live off of.
Most of what he owns was passed down from his family, a small farm, some cattle and a few crops.
His days are very simple.
He wakes up just before sunrise and admires the silence.
Then he tends to his few cattle and harvests a few crops.
For the rest of the day he relaxes in the sun.
loungned back in his chair with a big smile on his face, no stress and he is fully satisfied with himself.
Yet he’s noticed the world is in a fret.
Everything that is negative seems to get everyone’s attention.
Wealthy businessmen filled their pockets with gold buying out companies leaving families counting every coin.
New buildings rose up above the city streets where beggars lie below.
It was a city of dazzling beauty and dire poverty.
In the town square there was always news of a failed business man.
Or stories of failed harvests
Or even family drama.
The farmer notices that the negativity spreads quickly as people find it more entertaining.
While a nice remark will slide as undetected.
Later that night the farmer goes to his porch to watch the sunset.
The oranges, pinks, yellows are beautiful as each second passes the crest of the land swallows the sun.
Then the white moonlight casts over the land.
He looks up into the dark starry sky; there is no light to disturb him, just himself and the night.
The slight breeze of wind hits his chest putting him to sleep.
This simple life is much more peaceful.
November 5, 2026 at 8:09 am
I like the comparison between the complex city life and the simple life of the farmer. You also create the atmosphere and mood really well, making it easy to imagine the setting and emotions as if they were real.
November 5, 2026 at 8:13 am
I really like the line “Yet he’s noticed the world is in a fret.” It really shows the turn from his positive happy life to the negative side of things really quickly and I think that was a good add to the story.
November 5, 2026 at 9:52 am
NL this is a great piece of writing. I like how you use imagery at the end and it really brings the reader into the story.
November 5, 2026 at 9:59 am
He’s a simple man. I love this story, I also appreciate the sentance structure.