Maybe there was a little blip of a heartbeat.
Perhaps there was a small breath of air.
Maybe it would have gone differently if I hadn’t just stood there.
She might still be alive today –
Probably not.
Grief is such a strange thing –
You can’t help but replay it in your mind.
Think about what you could have done differently.
What could have been, but will never be.
I remember the room she was in –
All the machines and wires that were attached to her.
I remember the distinct chemical smell of that hospital room.
There was a tall window stretching to the ceiling beside her bed overlooking the river.
Maybe if there had been a heartbeat, it was for us.
Perhaps it wasn’t a sign of life, but a sign of her love,
The love that she was leaving behind for us.
That one final beat was her goodbye.
February 24, 2026 at 9:17 am
The last stanza was so heavy, very heartbreaking, but it also ends with a note of peace.
February 24, 2026 at 1:46 pm
I like how you structured the poem and how you tried to describe the better part of the situation at the end. I think it’s really emotional and it shows hope.